Thread: 大唐双龙传 [Da Tang Shuang Long Zhuan] by Huang Yi

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    Thanks foxs!

    missed a coupled of chapter this week
    thank god lunar new year is around ..

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    Nice Lunar NY present ... thks foxs.

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    Default Book 10 Chapter 5 - Part 2

    Akolaw, so its kind of fanfic or spinoff (except by different author). Sky, I am afraid KZ only saw her like he did Yun Yuzhen (I wonder if she would sleep with him, although I don't think XZL would do that). Lao Qianbei, I knew youd like it. HPC, Abhay, kink, you are welcome. Critical, different word. Do a google image search on Taoist horsetail whisk, youll know what it is. Ycb, Subudai, I agree, Huang Yi did a good job. Bocah, Dongbin, happy lunar new year. Short update today, more tomorrow.


    The one on his left was the Great General under Shen Luoyans command, Chen Tianyue, who impersonated Shang Zhen, a martial art master from Hua Shan Pai [Mount Hua in Shaanxi]. Hearing the command, together with a young martial art master on Li Tianfans other side, Xia Xinquan, one sword and one saber, they intercepted from left and right, one slashed upward the other stabbed downward, with the intention of giving Kou Zhong difficulty in dealing with it.

    In terms of strategy, they were doing the proper thing, simply because anybody could see that Kou Zhongs saber strike some kind of un-retractable overbearing momentum, so that it was impossible to meet the saber blade head-on.

    Everybody at Li Xiunings side pulled their weapons and thronged forward to prevent the enemy from forming a siege against Kou Zhong. Kou Zhong laughed aloud; like a swimming fish he flashed in between the two enemies, unexpectedly Chen Tianyue and Xia Xinquans sword and saber fell on an empty space, while their bodies were brushing close to each other. It was precisely this cun or so distance that decided their fate.

    Like lightning flashes the yellow glow struck.

    Xia Xinquans power was at least two notches below Chen Tianyue. He was the first to be hit by the saber, so that he spun and staggered back, his blood splashed. Even he himself was not clear which part of his body was hit, due to the speed of the saber.

    Chen Tianyue now had to face Kou Zhong alone. By this time, Li Tianfan, Shen Luoyan, and the others were retreating outwards. While he was in shock and was about to dodge out as well, Kou Zhongs saber qi had already enveloped his entire body. The Moon in the Well sometimes appeared another time disappeared in front of his eyes; the changes were indeterminate. Clenching his teeth, he focused all his energy, and slashed out with his sword.

    Ever since his debut, this was the first time that he was unable to grasp the changes in the opponents moves, and was forced to brandish his sword blindly.

    Dang! Dang! Dang!

    Chen Tianyue continuously changed his direction three times, while also continuously backing off before he was able to neutralize Kou Zhongs one saber strike.

    Kou Zhong was cheering inwardly, but his saber was still relentless. The Moon in the Well fantastically filled the air with its yellow light, like howling wind and torrential rain it stormed toward the pasting and gasping Chen Tianyue.

    This moment Li Xiuning and the others also arrived. Shen Luoyan and Li Tianfan exchanged glances; they knew that their plot tonight has completely fallen through and stood exposed, plus they were totally under the enemys control. If they did not seize this opportunity to escape, they could forget about staying alive. Thereupon with a loud shout they quickly flew away.

    Chen Tianyues miserable scream was heard from behind.

    When Li Tianfan and Shen Luoyan looked back, they only saw Li Xiuning and the others chasing them like the wind, but Kou Zhong had disappeared.

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    Xu Ziling flew down at an angle like a big bird toward Shang Xiuxun. Xiang Batian and Fang Jianding immediately soared to the sky to intercept.

    Cao Yinglongs spear merged with his body into one entity as he charged toward Shang Xiuxun, becoming a blur of spear shadow, with awe-inspiring momentum. His thought was that if he managed to separate the two, and strike them one by one, even though they had lost Mao Zao, it would still worth the price.

    This moment Shang Xiuxun was busy facing the three long sabers and two long spears that attacked wildly from all directions, so that momentarily she had to change from offense to defense.

    Seeing Cao Yinglong coming to attack, she knew the situation was not good; hurriedly she focused her attention and gave her all. Her left hand unleashing her exquisite and outstanding technique, she grabbed a spear being thrust toward her flank. Exerting a sudden force, thump! the bandit wielding the spear immediately fell sitting down on the ground, with blood flowed out of his eyes, ears, mouth and nose. Without making any noise he fell face up and gave up his ghost.

    Applying a sucking force onto the sword in her right hand, she led the man wielding a saber who was meeting her face-to-face, toward the spear thrusting at her from behind. With a miserable cry the spear pierced his chest and thru his body.

    At the same time she flew backward; not only to evade the other two sabers, but also to make the spear wielders behind her to kill their own men. In his confused state of mind, plus he was unable to hold back his spear, a saber wildly struck the vital point on the pit of his stomach. The man was thrown backward.

    Shang Xiuxun abruptly charged forward, the sword in her hand turned into thousands of sword shadows, two saber-wielders were nearly hit at the same time, and thus ended the bandits effort to besiege her.

    Meanwhile Cao Yinglong had just flown above her. Seeing her brilliant swordsmanship, he knew that they would not be able to capture her alive, so he put all his strength into his spear to strike.

    The violent qi was suffocating that the crowd of bandits had to move back, opening up a large area of open space.

    Bang! Bang! continuous clashes rang as Xu Ziling relentlessly exchanged blows with Xiang Batians pair of rings and Fang Jiandings pair of wolf-teeth clubs.

    Although he had the advantage of downward momentum, the force from the two mens combined assault was enough to jolt him that his mouth spurted blood, even a small piece of skin and flesh from his right leg was gashed by the wolf-teeth mace in Fang Jiandings right hand.

    However, the two Big Bandits had also suffered quite a setback. Xu Zilings fantastic technique and his spiraling energy pressed them down that they were unable to unleash their follow-up move, and their bodies were spun sideways and were thrown to the ground, in such a sorry state.

    On the other side, Cao Yinglong was striking down from the air, each spear strike was fast beyond human comprehension, yet each one also carried a flash of change, swift and powerful without equal, unceasingly taking advantage of each spear-sword impact force to propel himself halfway back into the air, before using the thousand-catty fall to drop back down; hence he was always occupying advantageous position.

    Being the Ranch Master of Flying Horse Ranch, all along Shang Xiuxun was lacking Cao Yinglongs rich real combat experience; it was only now did she realize that she had fallen into his evil schemes. Not only she had to deal Cao Yinglongs full weight, she had also cope with unending volleys of arrows and secret projectiles from four sides, eight directions. As one can well imagine, she was struggling with everything she had, and very soon she already suffered not a few injuries.

    While her fragrant sweats were dripping profusely, Xu Ziling arrived.

    Cao Yinglong was aghast; he had never expected his hurricane-like offensive still failed to put this delicately pretty beauty in order. While maintaining his attack in disregard of minor injuries he suffered, a strong vortex of qi stormed at him from above.

    Cao Yinglong groaned inwardly. Raising a mouthful of true qi, he turned from smart to clumsy, and soared to the air, brandishing his spear to meet Xu Zilings fist head-on.

    A bizarre thing happened: Xu Zilings own body was unexpectedly spinning faster and faster, so that by the time the fist and the spear met, Xu Zilings body had turned into a rapidly spinning shadow. Watching this, the hundred or so bandits in the battlefield were flabbergasted.

    Cao Yinglong had no choice; the power of his entire body had been concentrated on the tip of his spear, so he might as well shoot it out toward Xu Zilings fist.

    Boom!

    Two streams of qi collided, violent explosion spread out everywhere, forcing everybody to back away.

    Cao Yinglong did not feel like he was hit by a solid object, rather, it was a huge, unequalled rapid vortex of energy with sharp edges, which rolled around his own true qi and forced it back into his body.

    He was an outstanding character after all; throwing his body sideways, he rolled over while spewing a mouthful of fresh blood before he was able to disperse the opponents extremely strange qi energy.

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    Thanks, foxs.

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    thanks foxs ...

    gong xi fat cai ... as they say it here

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    thanks foxs!


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    Thanks foxs.

    Happy Lunar New Year to all.

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    Thanks foxs. Wow... Xiuxun can fight well. Can't wait for tomorrow.

    Happy Lunar New Year !!!!

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    sort of. My comment was on the status of da tang and how it inspire other writers, but this is difficult to give a clear picture, so I use Tung Ren as a messure to give an impression.

    Please note these writers are professionals (at lease some of them are)

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    expand the list to top 10, 4 of them from da tang, the other 6 from 4 of JY's book.

    These refect the acceptance and fan base of da tang.

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    Weekend question :
    Who can prove how old Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling is at this point in the story ?
    I know more than I can express in words, and the little I can express would not have been expressed, had I not known more. 弗拉基米爾弗拉基米羅維奇納博科夫

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    Default Book 10 Chapter 5 - Part 3

    I promised an update today, but can't access the Internet from my laptop. Long story ... I will have to wait until later, but no later than tomorrow morning. I am posting this from my cell phone.

    EDIT: Never mind, I got it back. I am staying at the hotel and am using their free internet. I thought if I could not get it back, I would have to wait until tomorrow to do it at the office.

    Jaya, kink, you are welcome. Bocah, Ysabel, Lao Qianbei and everybody, Happy New Year! Akolaw, thanks for sharing. Xu Xiong, why dont you throw your guess on that? Perhaps the others would love to join in. The end of fight.



    Xu Zilings condition was just slightly better than his. Stopping the spin, he had to spurt out the second mouthful of blood; but then he took advantage of the impact force to turn around and leap to Shang Xiuxuns side. After staggering a few steps he was able to steady his footstep.

    Cao Yinglong dropped down on his butt on the ground, rolled about a zhang away, and only then was he able to spring up.

    Idiots! he roared, Why havent you attack?

    Like having a rude awakening the crowd of bandits swarmed toward Xu Ziling and Shang Xiuxun. Once again the ear-splitting battle cry filled the air.

    ※ ※ ※

    Kou Zhong was sitting on a rock high on the cliff above. Removing his mask, he fixed his eyes on the two figures, which, by this time, had just reached the edge of the mountain.

    Because he had trailed Li Tianfan before, he was able to use this shortcut to beat him by reaching this place one step ahead and waited for his honorable arrival here.

    In his heart, he had neither anxiety nor delight; his feeling was cold and detached that even he himself did not understand. He could not just kill indiscriminately, but he could not turn a blind eye toward the enemy either.

    After finding out that Li Tianfan was Li Mis son, he already made up his mind not to let him go back alive to see Li Mi. But all along he still had a feeling toward Shen Luoyan; it was hard for him to ruthlessly destroy the flower. Outside Baling County that day, he even let the Mermaid You Qiuyan go, much less Shen Luoyan!

    Under the moonlight, Li Tianfan and Shen Luoyan were approaching rapidly.

    They started with more than ten people and now they became only two people; evidently in order to pursue and attack Li Xiuning, they had paid a bitter price. It was also obvious that Li Tianfan and Shen Luoyan were selfish people, who did not hesitate to sacrifice their subordinates lives in exchange of their chance to escape. If they were not solely preoccupied with escaping, it would not be that easy for Li Xiuning, Chai Shao and the others to subdue their men.

    The two people eventually detected his presence; they halted in shock.

    Raising the Moon in the Well, Kou Zhong leaped down, and stood at the peak of the slope to block their way. You think its that easy to leave? he said with a cold laugh.

    Li Tianfans eyes flashed with a deep cold murderous intent; glaring viciously at him, he said, Wheres your partner?

    Shen Luoyans beautiful eyes suddenly exuded a red-hot expression, but it disappeared just as quick.

    Kou Zhong sneered and said, To deal with you, this kid, me, one person, is more than enough. Others are experts in both literature and martial art, but you are an expert in hiding and fleeing, plus very adept in easily abandoning your subordinates. You are really unworthy to be Li Mis son.

    Li Tianfan laughed indifferently and said, Do you want to arouse my anger? Its not that easy. No need to waste too much words, make your move, lets see your real skill!

    Kou Zhong saw Shen Luoyan pulled the soul-snatching hairpin from her hair, but did not see Li Tianfan producing any weapon. Inwardly he was quite astonished; could it be that just like Xu Ziling, this guy also loved to use his fists and legs?

    But this moment he had no time to think. Taking a step forward, he pointed to the two using his Moon in the Well, sending out a powerful saber qi.

    Li Tianfan let out a cold laugh. Not allowing Kou Zhong to amass his momentum, he flipped his two hands to reveal a pair of short blades approximately two chi long each. One slashed upward the other stabbed downward, his technique was vicious and harsh to the extreme. Laughing, he said, The right is called shooting the sun, the left is called moonshine; they can cut gold and pare jade. Kou Xiong better be careful!

    Seeing that even though he verbally abused Li Tianfan, yet he was still able to maintain his elegant demeanor, Kou Zhongs heart shivered in fear. The Moon in the Well swept swiftly; relying on the weight, length and the sharpness of the weapon, he tried to gain the upper hand first.

    Yellow glow suddenly flared out. Its power was definitely unstoppable; the violent saber qi hacked down on Li Tianfans clothes fluttering in the breeze.

    Li Tianfan did not show the least bit sign of fear; rising to the challenge, he fought a fierce hand-to-hand combat with Kou Zhong.

    The sound of weapons clashing was ringing incessantly.

    Surprisingly, Shen Luoyan was simply watching with folded arms, as if she had full confidence on Li Tianfans ability.

    In a flash, Kou Zhong, using the extremely agile swimming fish shenfa, successively sent out a dozen or so swift saber strikes toward Li Tianfan from different angles; a very intense offensive so that from attacking, Li Tianfan was forced to take defensive stance, the all-out attack became dodging and evading.

    But Li Tianfans shooting the sun and the moonshine, two blades, were moving with elaborate and exquisite changes. On top of that, his footwork was fantastic. Every time Kou Zhongs saber slacked off a little bit, immediately he adopted counterattack style, forcing Kou Zhong to strenuously maintain his offensive momentum.

    It was only now did Kou Zhong know that Li Tianfan was indeed not a dog child [from idiom: tiger father would not begot dog child].

    Shen Luoyan glaring like a tiger watching its prey on the side also posed a great threat to him.

    Kou Zhong remembered Lu Miaozis Escaping One principle, but in reality he still did not know how to use it. All he could do right now was sending his vortex of qi via his Moon in the Well, which turned into streak after streak of yellow lightning constantly striking Li Tianfan.

    From the beginning Li Tianfan did not stop retreating, the sabers circle was getting narrower and narrower. When it looked like his blood was about to splash under Kou Zhongs saber, suddenly he abandoned his blade and stretched out his arm to block.

    Kou Zhong was greatly surprised; he thought that the opponent should not be so desperate to risk his life like this. Hurriedly he reduced his power by thirty-percent.

    It was at this moment that Shen Luoyan made her move. The Soul-snatching Hairpin swiftly lunged toward Kou Zhongs open right flank. Her shenfa was as quick as a demon.

    Dang!

    The Moon in the Well struck Li Tianfans right arm, creating a loud metal-to-metal clashing noise.

    Kou Zhong realized that Li Tianfan must be wearing some kind or magical armor on his arms. He knew he had fallen into disadvantageous position; also, he knew now why Shen Luoyan picked this right moment to launch her attack. Hastily he dodged sideway.

    Li Tianfan laughed aloud; his blades momentum changed fast. Relying on his arms, which were impervious to the enemys sharp weapon, he unleashed a series of violent attacking moves to penetrate the opponents defense, entering every crack and loophole in Kou Zhongs saber momentum.

    Shen Luoyan repeatedly let out her tender shouts, as she continuously circled around Kou Zhong, launching surprise attacks each time she saw an opening.

    Kou Zhong has lost his advantage. Were it not for the opponents had to spend considerable strength to deal with his vortex of true qi, perhaps he would have been defeated early on.

    Realizing the disadvantageous situation, Kou Zhong let out a long laugh, and suddenly retreated toward the top of the slope, while at the same time his saber hacked down an empty air.

    This saber strike was actually in accordance with the Yijian Technique.

    Li Tianfan and Shen Luoyan realized suddenly that this one saber strike actually sealed up all spaces from which they could launch their attacks, so that any successive move they were planning could not be unleashed.

    Overwhelmed with shock, the two people backed off.

    Revealing a bright, sunny smile, Kou Zhong put his saber back into its scabbard and spoke amiably as if he was addressing his old friends, Enough playing today, please say hello to Duke Mi on Xiaodis behalf.

    And then after another loud laughter, he winked at Shen Luoyan, and flew away.

    After being shaken by Kou Zhongs like a heavenly steed soaring across the skies saber strikes, unexpectedly Li and Shen, two people did not dare to restart the battle.

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    With their backs and hips pressed up against each other, Xu Ziling and Shang Xiuxun dealt with wave after wave of attacks from four sides, eight directions. A strange feeling that they were of the same flesh and blood started to develop in two peoples hearts.

    Dead bodies were scattered all around them, the number of cuts and wounds on their bodies was also growing more and more.

    Cao Yinglong, Xiang Batian and Fang Jianding, three Big Bandits were standing on the eaves. From their vantage point they directed their subordinates in continuous offensive against the two people under siege below.

    Suddenly the sound of battle cry sprang up everywhere from the southeast direction, and rapidly approaching.

    Cao Yinglong stomped his feet, his countenance changed. What kind of trick is this? he said, How come we know nothing until they arrived here?

    Fang Jianding roared; he was about to rush down to deal with Xu Ziling, two people, when Cao Yinglong pulled him back and shouted, Small neglect may breed great mischief, we retreat immediately.
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxs View Post


    Xu Zilings condition was just slightly better than his. Stopping the spin, he had to spurt out the second mouthful of blood; but then he took advantage of the impact force to turn around and leap to Shang Xiuxuns side. After staggering a few
    With their backs and hips pressed up against each other, Xu Ziling and Shang Xiuxun dealt with wave after wave of attacks from four sides, eight directions. A strange feeling that they were of the same flesh and blood started to develop in two peoples hearts.
    Look like XZ has found his soul mate. Bye bye bro KZ.

    Thanks foxs. You are my favourite TLer.

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    Thanks, again!

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    Good start to the Lunar New Year ... thks foxs. Hopefully, something develops between XZ and SXX.

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